Overall, the song was very well received and enjoyed by the people judging our idea, so we can continue carrying it throughout the project. They also seem to agree with the look of the stars that we are invisioning, which is rather dark clothes and a little harsher.
However, they seemed to oppose the idea that we had with the photographic dark room and the going into the memories bit, because a) the idea would juxtapose the industrial pieces and probably wouldn't edit well together, and b) the memories would be complicated to make, and also the artist wouldn't really have memories to go back on because she is our age and probably doesn't have significant events in her life that are important enough to look back on. Therefore we need to rethink this element.
Here is a soundcloud of Luke's Feedback.
Here is a video of our presentation and the feedback.
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